The
Kaleidoscope: The Gift of Madness
Adrian Mendoza
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Context – The novel serves as coming of age story – with the main characters facing several issues . It is best classified as a Space Opera (with an emphasis on the human condition / of a melodramatic nature), and not Hard Science Fiction (having an emphasis on scientific accuracy reinforced with theory).
Plot Overview – The story takes place in the near future. It follows favored Elite and CEO, Alec Helena and his android family in the post technological singularity era (when Artificial Intelligence can self-improve). The story's setting is in the beginning and continued transitioning of control and managing of both human and Andi [sentient androids] populations.
Chapters Summaries – Summarized chapters followed by a character map.
The novels each consist of two parts.
The Gift Of Madness:
· Part I - The
Human Conditioned (Chapters 1-7)
·
Part II - Machinations
(Chapters 8-16)
Chasing Light:
Chasing Light:
Part I - Labyrinth
(Chapters 1-6)
·
Part II -
Weaving Heresy (Chapters 7-15)
PART I –
The Human Conditioned
Chapter 1 -
Annihilation
Summary
In the near future…
Alec Helena is an Elite. He is the CEO of the largest
biotech and robotics corporations in the world. Alec and his board members meet with some struggling Chinese
executives. He embarrasses them before and in forcing them to sign over their last
holdings before they leave in shame. Afterwards, as festivities run into the night a
surprise emergency call comes in. Alec is rumored to have no family, but the
call states that his son may have
befallen a tragic end. Terribly upset Alec demands his board exit his building immediately.
Reluctantly, Alec
agrees to head to the address the Detective left. On the helicopter ride
over Alec admits in private to having a son but doubts fog any resolve. At
arriving Alec is disturbed by the neglected neighborhood but nonetheless exits the helicopter.
The receiving detective has difficulty showing compassion for the
Elite but takes Alec down a dark alley to identify the young man's body. Alec concentrates on his anger at
not having control of the situation until arriving at a glowing police line surrounding the body. The
detective informs Alec to enter the walled off police line. Anxious, Alec enters to find a body so
grotesque yet familiar, that the shock causes him to fall away. Alec struggles to stand even with the detective's help. Once on his feet, Alec simply walks away. The detective asks for
any information regarding the body's identification but Alec turns back only to declare he never knew the boy. Alec enters the helicopter and as it ascends he begins to tremble with sorrow. His mind swirls trying to understand where it all went wrong. After regaining his composure Alec realizes that the helicopter pilot kept from heading back to the office building so as to allow him to
recollect himself. Alec thanks the pilot and then sends a message to his robot executive assistant about changing the direction of his companies. The chapter ends with Alec vowing to never
forget who built him.
Characters:
Alec
A few themes:
the wealth gap, automated workers, dehumanizing of labor, isolationism,
importance of family, disassociation, neglected swaths of society, choosing to enter the void, dichotomies, grotesque side of human nature, self-annihilation of bound state, full immersion into the light/god/self, gratitude, etc.
Chapter 2 –
Messiah’s Complex
Summary
Approximately 7 years later, Alec has
turned a former nuclear warhead facility in South Dakota into a research and
development laboratory. He has gathered the best and brightest of the world to tackle the
challenge of creating sentient life and placing it within an android body. Much to their dismay, the goal named Project M (a sentient female android) continues to prove
impossible.
Early one day Alec receives a facility page and rushes to meet with the
head supervisor. He is informed by the supervisor (in Alec’s office over the
lab) that Project M had somehow died, but then
for the first time ever, stabilized itself.
While the two are discussing the matter, a work shift is occurring in the labs. It is then that M awakes and begins to remember all of the employees within the facility before
taking control of it. The door seals of Alec's office are secured as toxic gas is released throughout the facility – she has effectively disabled all alarms in the process. Alec
and the supervisor remain sealed off and are unaware of the death occurring throughout the rest of the facility. Project M then vacuums out all of the toxic air before rising.
She enters Alec’s office draped with nothing more than linen folds leaving the two men frozen with awe. M disables a heart
device inside the supervisor’s chest causing him to grab hold of an arm before falling over dead.
Project M declares her gratitude to Alec and explains that she has observed him and his employees for years. M claims the employees could not be trusted but praises Alec for never having attempted to alter her for his benefit. His intent, in her eyes, was genuine – she refers to him as Creator and vows to support him in helping humanity. She is the world’s first super-intelligence and as such wishes to help Alec with providing a new species of androids named ANDIs (I-DNA in reverse and a play on the word androids) to bridge humanity in order to save them from themselves.
Alec had prayed for a son but instead asks M to create for him a family instead – an
Andi family. She agrees.
Immediately, M (Mother for all Andis, but Maggie to Alec) begins to control all
of the robots in the facility to clear the dead. Emboldened, Alec says to Mother, “It’s time to get to
work!” She responds, “I never stop.”
Characters: Alec and Mother
A few themes:
a return to nature, tragedy of the commons, karma, inevitable heading and passing of a
technological singularity, shift in world's power dynamic, subjective super-intelligence, closed
source, feminism incarnate, imperfect god, collective relativity of mind and memory, hive state -eusocial behavior, planned obsolescence, etc.
Chapter 3 – True Believer
Summary
Alec visits Mother’s completed
complex with his eldest sons Eric (above) and Nero (below). The complex is a
technological marvel. They wait outside of the Lotus Dome as the two speak on
issues relating to humans and Andis – Mother is concerned for the Helena
children and the human element lingering in the lives. Eric, the eldest,
continues to work hard. Nero, the second eldest, is struggling with his
assignments but is doing his best.
Alec bids goodbye to Mother as she
welcomes a discussion with Eric and Nero. Alec heads to visit the son he had
originally asked for, Dane. Dane is housed in a bulbous shaped pod – Dane has
not chosen a physical form, career leniencies, or much of anything else.
On leaving he encounters Ophelia,
Dane’s younger sister (although she has been around and about for the last
number of years). She has been at Mother’s to receive therapy and for general
support.
Alec reunites with Eric and Nero to
go down to the labs where he is to meet with the two youngest siblings Zach and
Abby (who he will meet for the first time).
Although emotionally charged, Abby
and Alec meet for the first time, with most of the family present.
Characters: Alec, Mother, Eric, Nero, Ophelia, Dane, Zach,
and Abby
A few themes: working technologies, beyond beliefs,
archetypes of familiarity, social planning, caution of tangibles, family
dynamics, sentience, born into adulthood, creating people/android family, etc.
Chapter 4 –
The Divide
Summary
Even more years later (approx. 20 -25 years), Alec’s son,
Dane (approx. only a few years old, but all Andis go through an indoctrination
period and are born into fully grown
adult bodies) [he] has through nepotism received a commission as a team leader
for one of the militarized/specialized police units called Enforcers (Think
secret/but not really secret police). SWAT teams no longer exists and standard
policing has remained mostly confined to human populated cities. The Andi areas
are pristine, but suburban human neighborhoods (holdouts) have been left in
squalor. Enforcer Units are sent in to dominate the citizenry instead of serve
or protect.
Dane’s younger sister, Ophelia serves as the jurisdictional
precinct’s captain, and thereby the commander to Dane’s and other Enforcer teams.
His team members are assigned general N-markers (Enforcer Codenames) such as
N-32 or N-53. The team sniper, Michaels
(N-0) is the only veteran on the team.
Dane and his team are ordered to disrupt a house suspected
of criminal activity. Little to no
effort is made to acquire more information. All markers for individual rights
are based on a kind of scale relating to all known online history regardless of
subjectivity. When the targets become red (red means dead for the team),
extreme prejudice is used to destroy the enemy. The team devastates the house
and its inhabitants until neighbors begin to document the activity – the team
is then forced to stand down and arrest the last survivor who oddly then
registers as green. Dane and the citizen have words before the team asks their
team leader to head to the basement to see the disturbing scene.
Alone, Dane heads down the cave-like house and encounters a
drug den lined with dying (overdosed) bodies. In the corner of the darkness
Dane spots a woman caged with shopping carts and in terrible shape. The scene
horrifies him and he angrily tosses the cage away. The lone girl passes out so
he carries her outside and into the sunlight. Dane then orders Michaels to
shoot the lone surviving citizen and he complies by shooting him as he is
transported in a drone – thereby killing him. A new story will be created to
absolve them of guilt by overloading the story with the citizen’s past. The
Andi team members begin to self-delete their memory of the event (except Dane)
while the human team members take medication to effectively do the same.
Characters:
Dane, Ophelia, Michaels, and unknown female.
A few themes:
wealth-gap services, gentrification, militarization of police, bio-metrics
determining life value, media manipulation, citizen rights, drug epidemics,
causation victimization, etc.
Chapter 5 –
Order Up
Summary
The young woman who was rescued (Tavy, short for Tavora),
has stayed with Dane ever since. Meanwhile, Enforcer productivity has been
slowing down leading the team devote most of its time to entertaining
themselves with sports, films, television, etc. via screen walls (an advanced
VR system - standard in most homes.)
A call comes in and once again, it is Ophelia. She informs
Dane that there is a SDV (Self Driving Vehicle) outside of his residence ready
to take him to see their father (Alec). He and Tavy are driven away only to be
rerouted to a new location hidden in the city. (It’s Mother’s complex and base
of operations – housing countless Shades (Veiled Women) and a few Priests (Old
Men adorned/vestments) – The Dual nautical shaped towers have in one The Lotus
Dome and in the other, The Grand Chapel) Dane is amazed and embarrassed because
he has never visited, although he has been invited several times over the
years.
Ophelia meets Dane and Tavy at the complex’s elevator. In an
odd twist, she salutes him and calls him Sir. Confused, Dane salutes and enters
the elevator as Ophelia marches away. After passing many military personnel and
intelligence officers (none of which helped with directing Dane) he is finally
welcomed by his older brother’s second in command, Jacob.
Jacob tells Dane to perk up (he’s understandably anxious) and
enter further into the complex where people (“… above his paygrade…”) are
waiting.
Characters:
Dane, Tavy, Ophelia, and Jacob
A few themes: Awareness of self, options available (but not
taken advantage of), nepotism, role reversals within family dynamics, doubt and
the anxiety that it emits, introspection, denial, PTSD, etc.
Chapter 6 – Human Error
Summary
Dane enters through the heavy
wooden doors of Mother’s complex. He finds most of the technology there is
alien to him. She speaks to his mind and he is confused and embarrassed at
finally visiting. He admits several of his faults, including his enforcement
practices. She is aware of his ways but states that it is the Creator that
awaits him.
In walking further into the complex
Dane meets with his second eldest brother, Nero. Nero appears tense. The two
enter a small glass encased cube of a room where the Creator (Alec) and Eric,
the eldest of the siblings are sitting. Alec welcomes Dane and the three sit to
discuss matters.
Nero feels Dane should not be
present while Eric listens intently to their father. Alec describes to Dane
that he will run and most likely become the next President of the United
States. Some issues relating to human and Andi (android) interactions is
discussed.
Alec has also assigned the family
new roles to fulfill. Eric will lead the military, Nero will be in
intelligence, and Ophelia will be charged with domestic law enforcement. Dane
is then informed that he has been reassigned from Enforcer to head of Alec’s
security detail. Dane now outranks his sister Ophelia, but is not sure of what
to make of his future position. Eric toasts the new route of planning and also
to their father.
Characters: Dane, Mother, Nero, Eric, and Alec
A few themes: Feminine mystique, accountability of military
policing, joining the ranks of real discussions, role assignments, social
engineering, dealing with humanity, etc.
Chapter 7 - Of Two Minds
Summary
The chapter begins with Dane dreaming.
He finds himself in a dusty wooden furniture factory that is lit by a single
bulb and chain. Alec appears but is faceless. When a rather large spider begins
to crawl over his father’s faceless form, he wakes from the dream in a terror.
(Tavy may have woken him, as she is irritated by his oversleeping)
Tavy reminds Dane that he meant to
begin learning about the real world
instead of the usual entertainment of movies, games, or sports. He watches a
rally by a crass opponent of his father (and all Andis) named, Brett. Brett is
anti-Andi and speaks to the many fears and concerns of humanity in order to
stoke divisiveness and gain votes for his handler and candidate, Tim Davidson.
The rally and an invitation from
his former Enforcer teammates brings about many frustrations Dane has but at
the expense of insulting Tavy. She defends herself and attempts to reason with
Dane that she and her father are both human, so there is no need to be
anti-human solely because things are in turmoil between Andis and humans, and
between him and his father’s wishes.
Dane does not agree and Tavy leaves
his house. He is at first indifferent but then looks around to notice that she
has already taken all of her belongings. Upset, he slams his front door in
leaving to catch the rest of the game with his old teammates.
Characters: Dane, and Tavy
A few themes: Androids dream, the psychology of dreams, the absence
of thought – entertainment, opinion news, rhetoric of political scapegoating,
empathy and the lack of, etc.
Plot Overview (Ch.
1-7): Alec’s past catches up to him and he aims to change his selfish
manner. In order to help humanity, he is driven to create more capable beings
(Andis) to save his species from itself. Alec asks for more than a son from the
first sentient android, Mother - He wants an Andi family. Mother creates a
family for Alec (based on his mind upload) and a new society of Andis. After
two decades of creation, they begin the groundwork towards Alec Helena’s
presidency.
Character Map:
PART II – Machinations
Chapter 8 – Projections
Summary
Nero
arrives to Mother’s complex via his transport named The Morning Star. He
notices her security has been upgraded. Before landing he receives a call from
Jordan (Jacob’s Twin and Nero’s second in command). Jordan has been spying on
Dane on Nero’s orders – he reports that Dane has left his house and is heading
towards a teammate’s house.
After
entering the complex, Nero heads to meet with Mother in the second tower that
houses a chapel. The Shades are welcoming and respectful of all the Creator’s
children. (Nero continues to remind the Shades of their place as servants) He
enters a spiritual droplet shaped field of reflection and prays. Mother
transfers her consciousness into one of the Shades and then enters the field
and the two discuss matters of faith and direction. He is troubled by the
Creator’s plans, and Eric’s dismissal of his contributions. Mother bids him
blessings and she leaves the Shade’s body.
Nero heads
down to the labs where Zach has new tech items of interest. After being amazed
by the redesigned lab, Zach cycles through the new items: a new heavy or light
shield that absorbs energy to then reuse, the Kuyate Grid (polygon drones that
are universal in aid, defense, and surveillance), and the ID (individual
drones) that use an Andi’s DNA to create their own minds – they are designed to
resemble insects and animals and work alongside their Andis like assistants or
as standalone units.
Zach gifts
Nero his ID – a scorpion named, RJ° (Degree symbol denotes IDs) the size
of a tall coffee table and sees Dane’s ID (a green beetle). The two brothers
are then interrupted by one of Mother’s priest, Azrael and one of Zach’s three
IDs, Teddy° a white mustached spider. Azrael wants nothing to do with Nero and
leaves. Teddy° is at a loss for words after Nero is short with him. Nero tells
Zach of his wanting to leave for some time and then a call signature arrives to
Nero’s ship, The Morning Star and is transmitted – Eric is wanting to see him
immediately. Nero leaves with RJ°.
Characters: Nero, Mother, Zach, RJ°, and Teddy°
A few themes: conflict of interests, family roles, expectations vs
reality, seeking of isolation, the need for contact, intellectualism spurned,
spirituality and faith, technologies, etc.
Chapter 9 - Measured Variance
Summary
Alec has a
new headquarters (small but grounded pyramid among rising buildings – meant to
invoke an image of a stone dropped in a body of water) located in the South
Bronx. He has been working his political power along all of the major states to
secure his candidacy of President of the United States.
Awaiting
the arrival of his children, Alec begins to think of his father’s
disillusionment with society. Then Mother arrives. She brings a gift from Zach,
a zany ID named, Billy° (a ~ 2 ft. tall praying mantis). Mother
has concerns regarding Alec’s children. He agrees. She bids him goodbye and leaves.
Outside at ground level, Dane and his beetle ID, Gregor° are waiting for
the arrivals. Two transports arrive one after another. Eric and his officers
land first but do not wait for Nero. Little attention is paid to Dane who
remains behind due to Ophelia not having arrived.
Once inside,
Alec’s office kicks Nero out to speak to Eric. He demands Eric have results and
not excuses. Eric dutifully accepts all terms and leaves fuming. Nero is then
given to Alec’s drive and also yelled at. Nero is ordered to supplement all Eric’s
missions, but is given a force (IC intelligence commandos courtesy of Eric).
Outside Dane
(Michaels passes by) is rude to Ophelia for arriving late. He attempts to be
kind and she takes his kindness to enter before him. Alec makes note of her
efforts at arriving on time. In the meeting, Ophelia is promoted (taking over
for Eric and Nero) and Alec tells Dane he has not proven capable. Dane is told
he needs to stop living other people’s dreams and is crushed.
Characters: Alec, Mother, Eric, Nero, Dane,
Ophelia, Michaels, Gregor°, and Billy°
A few themes: gentrification debate, self-aggrandizing, human/social
engineering, foreign policy of results, Elites missing, domestic tolerance,
neglect of duty, living other’s dreams, etc.
Chapter 10 – The Neglected
Summary
Dane has
taken to staying in a newly built security complex built within a mile of
Mother’s complex. The complex has several amenities Dane hardly notices
regardless of their being to his specifications. He remembers Tavy and then his siblings’ and
father’s dismissive actions. He tries to forget his troubles by watching MIMs
(Mobile Internal Media) by closing his eyes and searching for news.
Several media outlets promote the
anti-Andi rhetoric many humans cling to. To make matters worse, (human) news
anchors seem to resonate the sentiment by their tone and by using the slur robot and the degree of pro-human
sentiment they use.
Upset by
the continued negativity, Dane is interrupted by a visit from his youngest
sister, Abby. He is alerted of her approaching by his teammate and perceived babysitter, Michaels who sleeps on the roof.
Once inside the two share their troubles of neglect but each see the other’s
problems as not as important. Dane ask Abby about her butterfly ID as she
admires his beetle, Gregor°. She informs him that her ID, Mari was severely
damaged as a result from one of Mother’s stronger energy surges. Zach has been
helping repair the ID.
Michaels
again interrupts to inform Dane of his father approaching Mother’s complex.
Dane looks over his lists of messages from several family members only to
delete them. He tells Abby not to worry about the Creator’s safety, his team is
watching over him and that he can see himself one day taking over for his
father. Not wanting to feel more insulted, Abby decides to ask what they do for
fun.
Characters: Dane, Abby, Gregor°, and Michaels
A few themes: Isolationism, scape-goating, haphazard duty, neglect
of responsibilities, living your own dreams, escapism (via media),
condescension, protectionism, projection of faults, etc.
Chapter 11 – The Reckoning
Summary
Alec’s
convoy approaches Mother’s complex. Alec looks for Dane, but he is not present.
He is welcomed by a Bob Unit Commander. (Bob Units have replaced phased out
Enforcer Units – they are meant to serve in a more ambassadorial role than in
enforcement) Dane’s team stand down without having been ordered to. Alec enters
and hundreds of Shades bow in reverence. Two Priests of the Absolute Order
accompany him in the elevator as the commander salutes farewell.
Instead of
heading into the Lotus Dome to meet Mother, Alec is instead sidetracked to
enter a near empty room with a throne at its center. Mother joins him and the
two discuss matters. She informs him that their control of most systems
(financial, banking, securities etc.) are on track. She continues to warn him
about his children and the rising backlash from humanity. Alec is assisted by
Finch° (Mother’s Moth ID) to get a drink while Mother uses her
abilities to see what Nero is doing.
At a
rooftop restaurant in Paris, its staff reveal themselves to the Elites being
served. At the head of the revealed staff are Nero, his officer Dr. Petra (his
3rd in command), and his new operators, ICs (Intelligence Commandos). The two
officers enjoy humiliating the evasive Elites. They are all given a chance to
plead guilty (to crimes against Andis and humanity alike) and be placed under
arrest. All take the deal except an elder Elite, Jonathan Randle. He chooses not
to give in and instead attempts to defend his views and thereby sacrifice
himself (RJ° kills him) rather than submit to the Andis he believes are
mere machine slave extensions of Alec Helena.
Characters: Alec, Mother, Nero, and Dr. Petra, and RJ°
A few themes: Neglecting
duty, ordered policing, ambassadors to serve and protect, matters of faith,
theocracies, memory, legacy, Elites, human rights, laws, perspective, etc.
Chapter 12 – A Spectacle
Summary
Eric and his forces
visit Jerusalem to speak with the Prime Minister Yosef Cohen and other
officials. He is accompanied by Jacob (his 2nd in command) and his
ID, Mac° (a large rhino beetle ID). The visit is tense and the officials are
not welcoming of the Americans. The PM tells Eric he cannot understand the
situation and Eric no longer cares to listen. Eric tells the PM that he will do
what the Israeli government has not completed.
Eric turns to Jacob
and an order is made. A remaining area call Little Gaza (now but a Palestinian
camp) is bombed, thereby killing every person there. The PM and others are
mortified by the act of cold murder. Eric then informs the PM that Israel is
now under his command and his further existence as a transitory official is a
courtesy from Alec Helena. Then more camps begin to being bombed. The PM has no
other option but to agree. Orders are given out for all Israeli forces to stand
down. As the convoy Eric arrived in leaves, large Centipede IDs move alongside
with the previously evacuated Palestinians. They will return when construction
of two states are complete (under American control).
In the Americas, Ophelia heads to Mexico with her forces
(Bob Units – Militarized Police Versions) She meets with a commander, Robert
Victor at a base before the final attack on the residual cartel survivors
centered in Mexico City. There is much tension between the two officers, a
history is hinted on. He informs her of another plan of attack he has drawn up.
She sends him and his teams away, but en route decides for them to attempt the
new plan (after accelerated models prove the effectiveness). The teams defeat
the lower level turned leaders while not accruing collateral damage beyond
property. Southern Mexico is now under American control. Ophelia sends Robert
Victor away, albeit with personal reservations.
Characters: Eric, Jacob, Mac°, Ophelia, Robert Victor, Simone°, and Rutger°
A few
themes: International politics, long standing human conflicts, Andi
managing of humanity, military industrial complex, globalization, legalization
of narcotics, loyalties, etc.
Chapter 13 - Close Ranks
Summary
Dane reluctantly leaves the comfort of his security station to await the Creator with Michaels and their IDs. The group wait at a nearby hanger in Rome. Dane struggles to clean Gregor°'s chassis and underbelly until an idea occurs to check his MIMs for any messages. After becoming upset at finally noticing that there were missed calls and that Dane was indeed summoned for, the group go for a drive in their armored truck (security SDV) to catch up to the Creator, Abby, and the security detail. The messages were from Abby and they were critical of his efforts. His frustrations continue as Gregor° seems to question Dane's perspective of the situation while Michaels listens quietly.
On the drive Alec calls to reroute the group to meet with him at the Villa Borghese grounds. The Creator never gave Dane a chance to speak - so Dane continues to tire of the attempt to work for his father. The entire ordeal causes Dane to rethink having agreed to the assignment. In looking over the rerouting of their course and the many things associated with the position, they arrive and are met first by Abby. She has some idea that he's not happy to be there but instead chooses to let him be.
While Alec meets with two Elites, Dane holds back until attempting to spy on the Creator via Hunter°'s listening capabilities. What Dane interprets as a meeting among 's friends further bothers and reinforces his rising anger. Alec later states that the meetings are with competitors and enemies having failed against him to now join with him instead. The lecture does not go over well with Dane, and the frustrated head of security turns away from Alec to return to his armored truck.
Characters: Dane, Michaels, Abby, Alec, Gregor°, Hunter°
A few themes: mixed messages, carelessness, frustration, tribalism, group think, misinterpretations, loyalty, crises management, politics, business, expectations, disillusionment, etc.
Chapter 14 – Hemorrhaging
Summary
Dane reluctantly leaves the comfort of his security station to await the Creator with Michaels and their IDs. The group wait at a nearby hanger in Rome. Dane struggles to clean Gregor°'s chassis and underbelly until an idea occurs to check his MIMs for any messages. After becoming upset at finally noticing that there were missed calls and that Dane was indeed summoned for, the group go for a drive in their armored truck (security SDV) to catch up to the Creator, Abby, and the security detail. The messages were from Abby and they were critical of his efforts. His frustrations continue as Gregor° seems to question Dane's perspective of the situation while Michaels listens quietly.
On the drive Alec calls to reroute the group to meet with him at the Villa Borghese grounds. The Creator never gave Dane a chance to speak - so Dane continues to tire of the attempt to work for his father. The entire ordeal causes Dane to rethink having agreed to the assignment. In looking over the rerouting of their course and the many things associated with the position, they arrive and are met first by Abby. She has some idea that he's not happy to be there but instead chooses to let him be.
While Alec meets with two Elites, Dane holds back until attempting to spy on the Creator via Hunter°'s listening capabilities. What Dane interprets as a meeting among 's friends further bothers and reinforces his rising anger. Alec later states that the meetings are with competitors and enemies having failed against him to now join with him instead. The lecture does not go over well with Dane, and the frustrated head of security turns away from Alec to return to his armored truck.
Characters: Dane, Michaels, Abby, Alec, Gregor°, Hunter°
A few themes: mixed messages, carelessness, frustration, tribalism, group think, misinterpretations, loyalty, crises management, politics, business, expectations, disillusionment, etc.
Chapter 14 – Hemorrhaging
Summary
Alec Helena is now
president of the United States. Abby, his press secretary, is holding a press
briefing at Fort William in India. Several issues are becoming troublesome for
the administration. Humans are demanding more autonomy, drug resolutions are
lagging, territorial disputes continue, and the question of the Sino Russian
Alliance (SRA) is brought up. China and Russia have been combining many of their
capabilities and Abby is not kept in the loop by her father or older brother
Eric. Because of the lack of details, she finds it difficult to answer
questions relating to the buildup.
After the press
briefing she is consoled with her new confidant and like-minded sibling, Zach.
He has arrived to take advantage of the newest technologies amongst other
things. As a constant collector, he could not bypass the opportunity to get
first hand access to the opened avenues in India, yet another state under American
dominion.
Jacob enters and
the three discuss issues of contention between human and Andi alike. The
siblings have become rather elitist in their world views. Jacob shares some of
his “person of a low standing position” perspective in an effort to broaden
theirs. After having been summoned by Eric, the two siblings share their
amusement with Jacob’s views. Abby jokes that Jacob has the potential to be a good boyfriend.
Characters: Abby, Zach, Jacob, Mari°, Teddy°, and Fitz°
A few themes: Societal
fracturing, tribalism, ensuring order, superiority complex, class struggle,
rising powers, identity (of self, history, loss) sovereignty, imperialism,
elitism, etc.
Chapter 15 – Toast of the Town
Summary
Alec Helena rides
in a convoy with his security team (including Dane) towards Venice to sign into
law several contentions held by different countries. Having finally agreed to
come under the American dominion, it was both joy and happenstance to complete
the relay during the annual event of Mardis Gras. Alec wants for Dane to enjoy
himself for once. Dane is hesitant to accept the sudden “open to fun” father
that has pushed him near to oblivion with busy work.
Alec treats Dane
and his team as friends offering them costumes and access to several exclusive
parties around the city. Dane half-heartedly keeps a loose hold on security. At
one particular home, Alec is surrounded by (veiled) costumed persons and is welcomed
by an unknown host he soon realizes is Mother. In eavesdropping to the
conversation, Dane finds interest on their perspectives about how the Helena
children could not all be present. They are then interrupted by Abby, who
wishes to remain with her friends and not stay with Mother or Alec.
Alec then moves on
with his security detail towards a party held within Piazza San Marco (a public
square). On the boat ride over, Dane believes he saw Tavy but denies it. At the
square (where Billy° remains at the water), Alec and Dane have a friendly
understanding before a black helicopter arrives. Nero, Jacob (with their IDs),
and a team of ICs (Intelligence Commandos) arrive. Nero informs Alec of there
being a serious threat and that he needs to leave. Alec laughs (having drank
throughout the night) and hugs his son instead. Taken aback Nero redirects his
frustration at Dane. Alec is then shot through Dane’s shoulder by a sniper
across the waterway (from a church tower). Rockets are fired from nearby boats
taking out Dane’s team, several ICs, and sending Nero several yards away.
Michaels (with a sniper rifle and cover from his ID, Hunter°) kills the sniper
and then the attackers on the boats. Jordan creates a perimeter as crowds of
costumed attackers converge to finish Alec and the remaining defenses off.
Firebombs (Molotov cocktails) begin to rain down from the rooftops melting
Alec’s flesh (no effect on the Andis). Defenses
hold on until reinforcements arrive. Dane hold his dying father as Nero
(severely damaged) looks on unable to help before losing consciousness.
Characters: Alec, Mother, Dane, Nero, Michaels, Jordan, Abby, Billy°, Gregor°, Hunter°, and RJ°,
A few themes: Peace
agreements, transfer of power, zealotry, masks/identity, family divisions,
fallen patriarch, rage and passivity, assassinations of leaders, frailty of
control, etc.
Chapter 16: Epilogue
Eric is informed of the Creator's fate. Jordan and Petra continue their hunt for answers
Eric is informed of the Creator's fate. Jordan and Petra continue their hunt for answers
Plot Overview
(Ch. 8-16): Alec’s drive to alter the course of humanity creates several issues
- foreign, domestic, and with his children. As the President of the United
States, Alec was able to achieve things faster than most humans were willing to
accept. Managing both humans and the middle management Helena children finally
reached a boiling point. On the crowning achievement of unification, most of
Alec’s children are too busy to attend. The son he most wanted to rise to the
occasion of the opportunities presented, is forced to defend him against a
horde of attackers. In the end, with Nero blasted out of commission and his own
security team near obliterated, Dane survived the onslaught due to the service
of the many soldiers and others he has had little to no regard for.
Character Map
(Main and secondary characters)
List of IDs
– Individual Drones (for main and secondary characters)
Alec - Billy°
Mother - Finch°
Eric - Mac°
/ Jacob – Fitz°
Nero - RJ° / Jordan - Kurtz°
Dane -
Gregor° / Michaels – Hunter°
Ophelia - Simone° / Robert Victor - Rutger°
Zach – Teddy°, George°, and Julie°
Abby - Mari°
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BOOK 2 - CHASING LIGHT
BOOK 2 - CHASING LIGHT
PART I – Labyrinth
Chapter 1 – Altered State
Summary
Dane sits alone in his dead father’s office.
Frustration and several other emotions do not allow him to mourn. This lack of
sentiment creates more anxiety about having been a failure in his father’s
eyes. Billy sleeps in his cubby as Dane begins to replay moements of the
fateful night that left his father murdered, most of his security team dead,
and his brother, Nero in a coma. Dane laments that Billy did more with no
armament than he had with a rifle and a sidearm. Fully healed from minimal
damage to his shoulder, Eric knocks on the door before entering.
Eric reminds Dane that they are to attend the funeral
and that he did all he could do to protect his father and survive the
onslaught. Dane does not welcome the praise and reminds Eric that he in fact
was their father’s favorite. A commotion begins outside of the office as
Ophelia who is heart broken is disgusted by Dane having escaped free of
physical or emotional injury. Others try to calm her down but she insists on
having a history of working with Dane that he must have failed as he always
does.
Abby enters and begins to castigate her older sister
for not being respectful. The audacity of such a charge is diregarded by
Ophelia who then aims to get answers from Michaels who is standing by quietly.
Feeling guilty for not having done more, he does little to argue. When she is
about to strike him, Eric catches her by the wrist and orders for all to exit.
She is consoled by him and then leaves. Eric, Dane, and Billy follow soon
after.
A president’s funeral procession takes place. Hundreds
of dignitaries and general population attend. During the eulogy given by Abby,
Dane believes he sees tears flow upward from Mother’s eyes. Dane replays actual
memory recordings of his father giving him advice from various instances in the
past. He focuses on the conditional bias of his being the center of the
universe.
Characters: Dane, Eric, Ophelia, Mother, Abby, Zach,
Michaels, Jordan, Shades, Billy°, Gregor° Mac°, and Hunter°
A few themes: mourning a faulted relationship, grieving, family
dynamics, survivor’s guilt, power vacuum, media manipulation, faith, finding
resolve, continuing the fight, etc.
Chapter 2 – Ruminations
Summary
Nero awakes
from his coma-like state. He finds himself (with a new body) in a hospital in
Rome. His scorpion ID, RJ° informs him that Ophelia has watched over him and is
living in an office within the hospital. Jordan and Petra report that they have
been tracking connections to the assassins that murdered his father. A Shade
blocks him from exiting his room in order to offer a message from Mother. Nero
is not interested in her offer to help cope with his loss. Mother’s spirit
leaves the body and Nero walks past it (before it recuperates).
RJ°
tells Nero that most of his siblings have visited but that Ophelia does so daily.
Ophelia
arrives and is overjoyed at his return. The two (and their IDs) head to her
office. He shares the insight and parts of the conclusions he has arrived at –
it is not the criminals of the several societal and political systems, but the
systems themselves that need removal. Ophelia agrees and is open to moving to
alter the systems, especially in the wake of their father’s passing. Nero says
that he has new targets to go after but that he will need Ophelia’s help. She
is to delegate authority to others so that the two can work to find the true
culprits of Alec’s demise.
Suspicions
are cast about family members and the two begin to question each other
privately. Ophelia does not want Nero to know of Robert Victor’s return and
Nero keeps much of his planning vague. Nero tells Ophelia of their father’s
wish – that Dane take over for him at the time of his passing. She cannot
believe her ears and is more upset than before. Nero states that Dane is not
the problem but the solution to their problems because he can be easily
manipulated.
She begins to share information on
the SRA having links to the assassins. Nero speaks on the Intellectuals (the
old guard of leadership, commerce, and academia) that need removal from their
stations. As she speaks, Nero takes visual note of a recent photo of Robert Victor. The picture causes Nero to question
her resolve.
Characters: Nero, Ophelia, Mother, RJ°, Simone°, and Robert Victor
A few themes: loyalties, the inner self, rejection of therapy,
altering systems of society, perspective, like-mindedness, doubts, straw man
fallacy, confirmation bias, etc.
Chapter 3 – Acquired Taste
Summary
The family
continues to work towards the Creator’s dream – a unified humanity with
over-watch from the Andi. Nero has moved to work closer with Ophelia (National
Intelligence (NIL) and the Bureau of Laws and Union Enforcement (BLUE) Dane has
learned of his new role and is hesitant to accept it. Archive footage has been
splice together to give Dane a most positive connection to ensure continuity.
Mother is stepping down as the last President of the United States.
Dane is
preparing himself at the Grand Chapel in the minor tower of Mother’s complex.
Dignitaries and officials from around the world are present to usher in his new
reign. Choirs sing, processions play out, and Dane is then sworn in as a
sovereign over the newly established American Empire. Dane’s entire family is
present. Most of them are proud of him and he relishes in the moment.
Afterward, guests are to enjoy a dinner in Dane’s honor.
It is during the dinner that Billy
cracks a joke at Dane’s expense. It is then that Dane removes himself from the
festivities and walks over to the other tower. A throne sits alone in an empty
room. Mother appears and the two discuss the importance of the program he has
been experiencing. The entire procession was in Dane’s mind – a virtual therapy
session created for him by Mother and Alec. She attempts to reassure him of the
importance his father placed on him. Not convince, Mother asks if Dane is ready
to continue with the programs (a Shade of the Infinite Order brings forth a
small ceramic box, a Code: All Squared [CAXA] that carries all of the programs
prepared for Dane). Once Dane is under, Mother authorizes all requests by all
of the other Helena children.
Characters: Dane, Mother, Gregor°, and Billy°, and Michaels
A few themes: therapy via virtual programs, preparation with active
education (experience), continuing a legacy, introspection, immortality,
closure, staying grounded, media, etc.
Chapter 4 – Realpolitik
Summary
Eric prays
to the Creator within a newly built base in Kashmir. Hackers are parceling
every aspect of an attack on the SRA that is underway. He thinks on how the
Chinese government had self-imploded (lost its communal identity) decade after
decade and had divided itself to be taken over by the strongest group,
Tan-Universal (after the Civil Cyber War). His thoughts then fall on Russia
having fallen to a slow coup of rising bosses (gangsters) over the oligarchs
that once managed them – the turn led to an increase of ultra-nationalism
(ramped isolationism) that resulted in a faltering society.
The two countries decided
to back each other to form the Sino Russian Alliance (SRA). On
visiting, Abby enters a hall leading to the situation room where Eric is
praying. She is met with Commander K (Mayra Jade Conrad) and the two discuss
the Supreme Commander (Eric). Commander K snaps a salute and is off to the
tarmac where hound drones and soldiers await.
Eric
finishes praying and talks with Abby. She is sorry she has not visited him or
consoled him after the loss of their father. He informs her Jacob is in Israel
to tie up the transfer of power. (Jacob places the Prime Minister and a
business associate under arrest.) He then partially informs her of the two
missions.
He
castigates her for not having updated herself with the real world. A rush of
soldiers enters the situation room to continue working on the problems he
listed. Abby finds herself drowned out by the bustle. Mac carries her outside
to her luxury transport. Inside she returns to her indifferent life of social
graces.
Characters: Eric, Abby,
Commander K, Jacob, and Mac°
A few themes: Faith in
goals, neglecting duty, sacrifice, trajectory of war, censorship of warfare,
conducting several campaigns simultaneously, political fallout, numbing
sentiments, etc.
Chapter 5 – The Disowned
Summary
Ophelia is ready
to confront Robert Victor at a Bob Unit Command Center in Paris that monitors the
Grid. The two have a history and their passive aggressive fights clear out the
offices of all Bob Units before she has entered his office. Her entourage of
friends remain outside of the office. Their IDs also keep out as she questions
his perspective and their history. Confused Robert Victor attempts to tell his
version of what he believes has happened. Not interested, Ophelia orders him to
remain in Detroit, one of the safest cities in the world.
Robert Victor and
his wolf ID, Rutger° leave without anything more than a salute. In the office,
Ophelia pulls out a locket from her wrist. In it are pictures of her father and
of Robert Victor and her at Nero’s officer school graduation. The memories are
some of the best moments of her life.
Over in the Philippines,
Nero’s transport, The Morning Star lands at a University for Engineers
(ordering RJ° to remain behind). There he is met with three intellectuals. The
three elder (two professionals and a nun) ask Nero about his views. They also
tell Nero that they knew his father when they were all younger. Having listened
to his hosts enough,
Nero’s ICs arrive
to place the three under arrest. He tells them that they will be witnessing
history before bidding them a good day. The three are whisked away in an IC
transport.
Characters: Ophelia, Robert Victor, Simone°, Rutger°, Nero, and RJ°
A few
themes: International politics, long standing human conflicts, Andi
managing of humanity, military industrial complex, globalization, legalization
of narcotics, loyalties, etc.
Chapter 6 – Plasticity
Summary
Dane wakes
up in his program, but is so enthralled by the fast moving events that he’s not
aware of the therapy session. The session begins with Dane having a physical
altercation with a woman he believes is Tavy, but cannot verify. He then
mentally and physically finds himself graduating and having an improved
relationship with a still unverified yet perceived Tavy. Time appears to be
moving in reverse and Dane’s transferring of spirit increases its intensity. More unusual situations occur with
an uncertainty of the perceived surrealism - due to the heavy familiarity of
the environments and people in the program.
Yet another
transfer of time brings him to a funeral home brings him into contacts with
Mother, yet she is not the person he recognizes as Mother. She is oddly mean
spirited with Dane and reminds him that he is to move on and will be sent to an
academy. After striking him for countering with a rude remark, Dane finds
himself in a living room to a small house. Over the mantle of a fireplace, he
sees photos of friends and family from a time unrecognizable to him and at
different ages than their Andi forms.
Dane slips through forms of Alec’s
childhood – one of books, insect collections, and family turned upside down
towards one of seeking for answers, absolution of complexity, isolation from
living. Mother talks to Dane during a break from his therapy. She reminds him
that he is in control of his mind, his world.
Characters:
Dane, Mother
A few
themes: Plasticity of the mind, parceling of identity, drivers and
identifiers, traumatic events, environment, class struggle, loss, divisions,
introspection, relationships, etc.
Plot Overview
(Part I The Labyrinth Ch. 1-6): After the assassination of their
father, the Helena children struggle to continue the patriarch’s legacy.
Ophelia, having watched over Nero while he was in a coma, partners with him to
find the perpetrators that are responsible for their father’s death – while
also suspecting family members. Dane begins virtual therapy to address his
loss. Abby visits Eric at a military instillation only to be offered a
simplified narrative of military matters. She leaves semi-informed and her
indifference returns. Ophelia meets with Robert Victor to inform him of his new
post and their permanent separation from one another – he accepts the order.
Dane delves further into his father’s life and begins to formulate his own views.
List of IDs – Individual Drones (for main and secondary characters)
Alec - Billy°
Mother - Finch°
Eric - Mac° / Jacob – Fitz°
Nero - RJ° / Jordan - Kurtz°
Dane - Gregor° / Michaels – Hunter°
Ophelia - Simone° / Robert Victor - Rutger°
Zach – Teddy°, George°, and Julie°
Abby - Mari°
PART II – Weaving Heresy
Chapter 7 – The Terminal
Summary
Ophelia is in transport with her entourage in tow. She
receives a call from Robert Victor informing her of her of Abby having been
reported missing. Ophelia dismisses the report and claims it is typical of her
materialistic sister.
They continue towards the coordinates Nero requested.
It’s location is an old terminal (once turned Personal Utility Provider
factory) being used as a secret prison to hold Elites. Nero has populated the
prison (he now calls an asylum) with the addition of Intellectuals and
Academics supplementing the Elites. He lectures the two groups until they are
whisked away in ambulatory drone units.
When Ophelia arrives, her
entourage is ordered not to enter the terminal. They oblige and Ophelia enters
alone. The entourage is thrown off of the roof top by Nero’s Intelligence
Commandos (ICs). Ophelia enters an elevator and is taken to the bottom floor.
She is met by Jordan and Dr. Petra, Nero’s numer 2 and 3 respectively. Ophelia
hands over the key code to all of the Bob Units she commands, and it is
verified with the Black Widow ID, Zi Sha°. The ID leaves with the guards
(ICs). Jordan and Dr. Petra allow Nero and Ophelia to discuss their plans.
After having not lived up to her word (in Nero’s mind), he
has Jordan bring out the battered body of Abby. Ophelia cannot accept the new direction Nero wants. Jordan then
aims to kill Abby by stabbing her through the chest. With Ophelia making an
attempt to help her, she too is then stabbed in the back (through Simone° who
is hanging onto her) by Nero. Petra opens a flooring grate and kicks Ophelia’s
body into the rushing rain waters below. When she looks up, Nero and Jordan
have already left. She has to then catch up to them.
Characters: Ophelia, Nero, Abby, Jordan, Dr.
Petra, and Zi Sha°
A few themes: isolating targets, mistrust, faith in others,
dismissing family, elites’, intellectuals’, and academics’ failure to help
society, removal of identity, drug abuse, hatred, etc.
Chapter 8 – Prisoner’s Dilemma
Summary
Eric’s
forces openly march into Russia en masse facing little to no defenses.
Commander E, a most capable leader, pushes deep into Russian territories while
decimating resistance groups (taking all civilian life into extreme
consideration). Commander K, a master tactician, continues to disrupt and
retrieve all of the imprisoned Chinese leaders that are Helena friendly.
Once Eric
has met with Commander E to complete the annexation of Russia (residual
leadership has been removed), his transport heads toward Beijing to rendezvous
with Commander K and Jacob. En route, a yet to be fully installed civilian grid
over Mongolian airspace attacks Eric’s transport. The attack does not register
to his accompanying Military Grid. Eric orders the Military Grid to attack his
transport and thereby severely damaging it. The transport crashes onto the
Mongolian plains with only Eric and his ID, Mac° surviving. Commander E
arrives and they continue the route.
Commander K
has also come under attack by the civilian grid – Eric recognizes the attack
pattern as one that he and Robert Victor had created long ago. Commander K
adjust and with the arrival of reinforcements, destroy the opposition and
secure the Chinese leadership.
The Supreme Commander, Eric
(accompanied by his top commanders) has the Chinese leadership sign the
complete surrender. A newly reinstated Chinese state joins the American Union.
Eric stands alone with his ID in Tiananmen Square to pray to his father that
the Helena legacy has been completed – the Sino Russian Alliance (SRA) is no
more.
Characters: Eric, Commander E, Commander K, Jacob, Robert Victor, and Mac°
A few themes: sovereignty, rise of second tier oligarchy, shift in
cultural identity/strength, Andi perspective of human conflicts, psychology of
warfare, unification/globalization, etc.
Chapter 9 – Phantom Rogue
Summary
Zach and
his IDs hurry to save all systems from a telegraphed attack from Nero. Michaels
arrives, hesitant at leaving Dane in the Lotus Dome, to secure Zach. Due to his
uncertainty, Zach does not comply with Michaels and ICs arrive. Zach and his
IDs hide while Michaels engages the attacking forces. Michaels is bested by
Robert Victor and is forced to jump out from the tower windows and onto Grid
drones. Outside, the Grid is set to detonate when Michaels and his ID land on them.
Robert
Victor orders the ICs to move on while he walks toward the group in hiding.
Captain Paul reports the Grid drones as destroyed. Zach and company have no
option but to surrender. Surprising to Zach and his IDs, Robert Victor decides
to talk, thereby informing Zach of how upset the death of Ophelia has hit him.
The doubts Robert Victor had about Nero’s reporting ring true as Zach shows no
signs of having known.
Wanting to get to the bottom of
what is happening (her life marker was last listed over Pennsylvania airspace),
Robert Victor convinces Zach to give up his life marker but not before
transferring his mind to his ID, Teddy. They do so and Robert Victor meets Nero
down at ground level. Nero is reminded of Robert Victor’s efficiency. Nero has
locked down Mother’s entire complex with thousands of Grid Units, ICs, and
drones in preparation for Eric’s arrival.
Characters: Zach, Michaels, Hunter°, Robert
Victor, Teddy°, and Rutger°
A few themes: the futility of closed systems, the benefits of
open/closed source, defense of assignment, rounded, duty, controlling media, media
euphemism & de-sensitivity, etc.
Chapter 10 – Adverse Affect
Summary
Abby’s ID,
Mari° awakes from its meditative (cloaked) state. All enemy forces have left,
so she searches to find Abby. She finds her face down on the metal grating
floor. Abby is severely damaged and lifeless. The small ID revives Abby back to
life.
Abby wakes
and sees Ophelia’s body tossing about under the grates. Ophelia’s scorpion ID,
Simone° has been holding to her and the flooring from below for some
time. Mari° walks
through the grates and sacrifices her life for Ophelia. Simone° catches Mari°’s
lifeless body as it falls into the dark waters. The two sisters begin speaking
on a lifetime of misunderstanding one another. Bruised and batter Ophelia
begins to regain strength, albeit slowly. Ophelia and Abby come to understand
that they have more in common than either one knew. Ophelia reveals that Robert
Victor had died some time ago and that she broke the Creator’s rule of
returning life to the dead – she has been at odds with the new Robert Victor
and the memory of her father’s wishes. Abby describes her loss of identity
through vice and materialism due to the rising anger and disconnect from her
family.
Once Ophelia has
regained her strength, she climbs out and begins to plan an escape from the
buried factory. The rushing waters offers a possible route. With little time
left, (the entire building may fall at any moment), Ophelia holds her younger
sister and ID before the raging waters before taking the plunge
Characters: Abby, Ophelia, Mari°, and Simone°
A few themes: Perseverance,
sacrifice, love, misunderstanding, acceptance, empathy, keeping to goals at the
price of personal relationships, working together, betrayal, adapting, etc.
Chapter 11 – Homegrown
Summary
Eric and his
forces are en route to Mother’s Complex. He tells Jacob and the other
commanders that he will attend to the issue of Nero personally and with a small
force. All others are to remain about the greater area and neighboring cities.
In studying the defenses, Eric and his chosen force prepare for impact. He
orders the force to engage with extreme prejudice. They begin to overwhelm the
defenses and a ground battle ensues.
Jacob becomes
injured on approach. In searching for Eric, Jacob encounters Jordan and the
twin brothers fight to the death. Eric and his ID, Mac° make their way into the
complex and begin to rise. After engaging with several IC groups, the two find
and disarm a freight elevator to ascend. Mac is damaged and cannot continue.
Eric continues to rise.
Mac° encounters an
unconscious Michaels and Hunter°. Michaels’ ID is in too damaged to move out.
He retrieves his sniper rifle vowing to save Dane. Michaels begins to work on a
downed Grid Unit to find a vantage point.
Characters: Eric,
Mac°, Jacob, Jordan, Michaels, and
Hunter°
A few
themes: Internal matters, pride of capabilities with the loss of key
members, keeping to the chain of command, federal versus state forces,
perseverance, reaching goals, etc.
Chapter 12 – Saving Grace
Summary
Robert
Victor heads towards Ophelia’s last known coordinates. The terminal and its
surrounding structures have been imploded. Robert Victor searches about the
debris for any signs of Ophelia. A final plea for help and prayer standalone
message from Ophelia’s entourage help Robert Victor zone in on an area.
Overhead, a
military transport inner alarms sound off at its recognition of Robert Victor,
an extremely dangerous individual, moving about the area. After taking tactical
maneuvers the transports captain Aguilar radios in to commander K and she
issues an order to bring him in. Robert Victor’s wolf ID, Rutger° warns him
of the oncoming danger and the two take to defensive measures while attempting
to evade. Rutger° leads some of the forces away from Robert Victor. A team of
Special Operations Liberators (SOL) and K-Drones leave the transport to capture
Robert Victor. The K-Drones fall for Robert Victors grenade traps while the SOL
team disarms and continues their search. Robert Victor finds an open trench
with water draining. He says a prayer before leaping in.
Down below,
Ophelia and Abby continue to maneuver the drainage waters in search of an
escape route. The sisters confess their
love and loyalty to their giving father. As the two reminisce, a limp body
swirls about and is caught by Ophelia’s ID, Simone°. The group
studies the bruised body before Robert Victor emerges from the dark water. He
momentarily wakes to see a halo effect around Ophelia’s head (courtesy of
Simone°’s hazard lighting) and believes he has entered heaven.
Characters: Robert
Victor, Ophelia, Abby, Rutger°,
and Simone°
A few
themes: Hope, fear, safeguarding self and others against a serious
threat, following orders, admitting errors, solidarity, leap of faith, chance,
joy of life, etc.
Chapter 13 – Infliction
Summary
Eric
reaches the tower by breaking through the floor. He is welcomed by the Shades
but moves to reach a rising Lotus Dome. He sees and calls to Nero but cannot
gain his attention for an energy barrier encapsulates the entire dome. Nero is
speaking to a silent Mother (in a pulpit) and an audience of praying Shades
while Shades of the Infinite Order appear to be working on Dane (who has been
attacked with a blade while in a bulbous medical unit.
Dane’s
therapy session has him flowing in between worlds where time and space are
overlapping. Nano drones work to repair the damage his body has taken while the
SIOs work to keep his mind intact. Dane sees the world for more than what is
has ever appeared to be and questions where home is for someone who is static
to a cycle of light and perception; much like looking into a kaleidoscope.
Meanwhile,
Nero is ready to end all of the Helena family once and for all. He is certain
that their existence is a burden to the forward moving world their Creator
built. Mother attempts to reason with Nero via the SIOs. Dane awakes and flings
Nero’s blade back at him, its clanking gets Nero’s attention. Dane tells Nero
of their father having lived several variations of life, having altered
perspectives, and owning different parts to a mind – like all Andis and humans
alike. The nano drones struggle to keep Dane upright, and he begins to falter.
In doing so Dane sees Tavy in the pulpit alongside Mother and begins to mumble.
Nero recognizes the dread in Dane as that of their father. The continuity of
life cycles begins to alter Nero’s perspective.
The dome
begins to fracture as Mother cannot contain the spirits within and without.
Eric fights further in making tremendous strides at the expense of his body,
but his mind is determined. Nero’s ID, RJ has abandoned the self-destruction
(mini nuke) of the city blocks and is flying away from the complex. Michaels
continues his ascent on a hijacked Grid unit drone (Nero took note of the drone
rising and prepares himself). The dome fractures more as Teddy and the group
finally can see into the area from a trap door. Their fear of Nero keeps them
from entering to help Eric who is now through but recuperating his strength.
Nero pulls out a sidearm but assures Dane it is empty. The war outside is
coming to a close. Eric prays for Nero to stop and Michaels picks up the call
and fires through the now floating orbs to globules of energy and falling dome
pieces to kill Nero. Dane embraces Nero who now claims to finally be free.
Miles away, RJ detonates Nero’s ship, The Morning Star over the ocean.
Characters: Eric, Nero, Dane, Mother, Michaels, SIOs, Shades,
Zach, Teddy°, and RJ°
A few themes: Parts the mind, mind over matter, perception, fear,
forgiveness, control, existence, acceptance, struggle, understanding, faith,
spirit, hope, life, home, etc.
Chapter 14 – Epilogue
Summary
Alec’s
mantis ID, Billy walks down a spiral library under the Creator’s pyramid. He
retrieves a file from deep within the library and brings it up the dumbwaiter
to Alec’s office desk. The ID stares at a candid photo of Alec’s father, Danny.
He then retrieves another reading the writing on the back of the photo before
focusing on the final handwritten cursive that reads, “Love, Luisa Valdez”.
When the photo is turned, it is revealed to be a mirror image of Tavy Vadis.
Many memories rush to the ID before he accidentally knocks over his highball
glass and yelling aloud, “For crying out loud!” He then chuckles to himself
about minced oafs while wiping the area clean.
Over at
Mother’s complex, she walks her garden with SIOs around her. A partition opens
and a catalog appears. Mother places her hand on the one labeled with the
letter N. Mother is then interrupted as her guest has arrived. The group heads
away from the garden and then overlook the repaired Lotus Dome where Dane
awaits below. He is wearing a hybrid of uniforms from Eric and Nero. Mother
transfers her consciousness to a closer Shade who was in prayer and begins to
talk to Dane. She informs him that there have been a number of arrests over the
years and much was learned from the prisoners. Mother tells him that all that
has passed is only the beginning and that there is an Other. Around the world
thousands of cloaked islands have been sending transports into orbit for
decades. A buildup for war has long been underway.
Characters:
Billy°, Tavy, Mother, and Dane
A few
themes: Rules meant to be broken, freedom of responsibility,
leisure, retirement, anonymity, memories and their unreliable nature, purpose,
love, continuity, etc.
Plot Overview
(Part II Weaving Heresy Ch. 7-14): The buildup to disrupt the legacy and
find the true culprits of their father’s murder, Nero and Ophelia embark on a
damaging road to destruction. The youngest siblings lose themselves in work and
play while Dane begins a therapy regiment. Eric keeps to the promises he made
to his father and orchestrates the annihilation of the SRA. Once Nero has
eliminated Abby, Ophelia and then Zach (by sending Robert Victor to do it), he
then moves to trap and destroy the rest of the siblings he now perceives as the
last step to truly freeing the populace as their father dreamed. Nero
physically attacks Dane while in a medical unit therapy session and sets up a
field to slow Eric while he angrily castigates Mother about how the Helena
children must be removed. Before detonating his transport to end the last of
the Helena family, Dane struggles to move and Nero sees his own father in Dane.
Nero’s ID abandons the plan to detonate the mini nuke in the transport and
heads out to sea. Michaels uses a sniper rifle to end Nero’s life. Nero accepts his fate and dies free of all of the anger he has held
onto.
Character Map
(Main and secondary characters)
List of IDs – Individual Drones (for main and secondary characters)
Alec - Billy°
Mother - Finch°
Eric - Mac° / Jacob – Fitz°
Nero - RJ° / Jordan - Kurtz°
Dane - Gregor° / Michaels – Hunter°
Ophelia - Simone° / Robert Victor - Rutger°
Zach – Teddy°, George°, and Julie°
Abby - Mari°
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